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versus: traditional and digital, some sketch
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For the traditional the only thing is, (if you did not know this) you can use a finger (I use my pinky mostly) to smudge the shadows which thus makes it a bit smoother and easier to erase if you mess up. For the digital, I myself do not use it so I can not give any advice or critique. I love the brick patterning on the house and the thoughtfulness you put into the old architecture and that it would not have perfect symmetry. For the digital I really like the coloring and the realistic spread as the ice melts. Keep up the good work!
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First, the digital is very nice. Otherwise, I am not a digital artist, although I know a bit this style:) So, I like the colors. Maybe you should use more custom and texture brushes to make your pictures more realistic.
Let's talk about the traditional one! I think it is really promising, the perspective and the composition are OK. My advice is, you should be more patient, you have to work on textures. I don't know how many pencils do you use, but the more you use, the best is the final picture. Because the 8B is darker and softer, and the 4H is harder and lighter. It is good to smudge the graphite with a handkerchief or something like that, but try to use different kind of pencils, to make more and more layers. It makes your drawing realistic. You can study the bodies, and everything you want to draw, to learn the weight of the objects, you know. And for the highlights, I always use white gel pen, or white acrylics.
I hope, I helped! :)
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:iconbrienneriel:
BrienneRiel Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Artist
Digital is very good!
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
thanks^^
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BrienneRiel Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Artist
Digital is very good!
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:iconartemisdragonheart:
ArtemisDragonheart Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, your hand drawn and didita work is both really nice ^^
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
thanks is nice^^
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nicolortizz Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Oh my god! I love it! Nice work <3
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
thanks a lot^^
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:iconannemaria48:
annemaria48 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
did u drawn it? i wanna learning :)
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
it isn't complicate^^
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:iconduggo38:
duggo38 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful... Well done !
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thank so much ^^
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LavinceLara Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
These are like school artworks or practice parts. I don't
mean they're something like that it just came to my mind
when I first saw this. But I really like the first traditional
pic, it's like haunting, empty, ghosty place. Did you used
a finger or what cause it looks so soft? But I really like
the details. Animals or something else could fit the pic well.

And the second one, that ice looks actually very real. They're
like glowing but I have seen glowing ices, not the first time
but they aren't real anymore, haha. But I really like that too.

Good job!
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thanks :)
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:iconlavincelara:
LavinceLara Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Welcome ^^ Keep on drawing
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Ashz1234 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
These are really good, your great at drawing images by hand and digitally!
The only bad comment I'd make is that the angles on the house are slightly out, but apart from that these are great![link]
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thanks i understand^^
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:icongryficzka666:
Gryficzka666 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I think that this picture is very ingenious. Tradition vs digital... Both drawings are very well drawn. Personally I think that if you make any "versus" picture, it should be one the same thing but drawn different (for example ice cubes drawn with a pencil versus cubes made in Photoshop). All in all, this picture is very good. Keep up the good work!! :)
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
good idea :)
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:icongryficzka666:
Gryficzka666 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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:icondarenvays:
DarenVays Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really very like trees at the first art!
But the trees on background looks further than the house. And biggest.
The house and the trees look better individually.
You can move the house to skyline. What do you think?
This is only my opinion. :)
Melting ice is awersome!
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
you're right^^
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:iconfrostibubbles:
Frostibubbles Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Professional General Artist
Your traditional is good. Direction of lighting is important when adding contrast to a picture, so try adding some eraser marks through the left sides of the tree trunks to create highlights in the bark for example. When your shading with pencil, striking the paper in certain places with the eraser can be just as effective to add light as smudging is to add shadows. Your digital is great! I don't know much about that either, but it looks good to me.
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thanks :)
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:iconpetralaai:
PetraLAAI Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Well, when I draw a landscape I usually start from the background.
It's a trick for making good depth.
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
ok^^
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:iconattackment:
attackment Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice!
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thnks a lot :)
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:iconjavierorlando:
JavierOrlando Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats great work. You are really good at shading
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
thanks :), bit i did better
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:iconthepinkcatartist:
ThePinkCatArtist Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:O
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
?
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:iconthepinkcatartist:
ThePinkCatArtist Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW its pretty
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spensethefence Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I like the traditional, the perspective seems realistic and the composition is well-spaced, etc. ovo I like the digital a lot, it looks very accurate and the reflection against the background adds a lot!! good job on both vwv
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thank so much^^
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:iconspensethefence:
spensethefence Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no problem vov
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:iconzemi-chan:
Zemi-chan Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool ! Literally :iconawesomefaceplz:
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thank a lot^^
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:iconzemi-chan:
Zemi-chan Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np^^
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:iconbeaniez:
Beaniez Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
It's very nice :)
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thanks^^
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:icontrixynetex:
TrixyNetex Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My thoughts;
Both pictures look good, however in the sense of one versus the other, I'd say the ice cubes win.
The digital sketch is a lot cleaner and crisper. The colours and shading look good and the slight reflection on the black surface add depths to your piece. Maybe one or two more highlights would have been good.

As for traditional piece, the house detail is good with a nice perspective, however this perspective doesn't seem to match the rest of the piece. Personally I would have made the house more of the focus, either by placing it in the middle or making it bigger. The only other thing I would tell you to be careful of is that items/objects in the foreground need to be clearer, more in focus as they would be closer and easier to see details. Unfortunately (and I'm not sure if this is due to the scan quality) but your trees appear slightly blurred. Which wouldn't really be a problem except for the house, which has more detail further back.

One more note; I would upload these images as separate pictures, keeping this one of course, but as the two aren't really related to one another so I'd suggest splitting them.

Finally, keep up the good work :)
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Deleniss Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I agree with Alucard, it could use some smudging, but besides that I love it. For smudging I use a q-tip for small spaces and a tissue for larger spaces (using your finger could leave oil on your page). I don't do digital art so all I can say is that I love it.
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kikotori Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow, this is amazing!
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thanks^^
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:iconmohabk:
MohaBk Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Interface Designer
I love the digital one !
hmm .. You shouldnt use your finger to smudge .. that's not very professionnal and it's kinda dirty :/ try working with hatching
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
ok^^
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76Bev Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Hello, heres my thoughts, the house is lovely. Very detailed and the perspective is good. The small tree in the front is not needed and the large tree should dominate the foreground. The horizon is slightly high and the piece lacks a focus. Perhaps go again with the house central, the large tree dominating the foreground and maybe trees behind the house to give depth. In my opinion that is. Good job in all. The ice cubes are very nice, as someone else said, it would be nice to see through the ice a little.
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thanks i like long advise^^
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:icongay-butts:
Gay-Butts Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Creative^w^
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:iconsebastien-baillou:
sebastien-baillou Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
thank a lot, but it isn't only creative i also use the work of the others people of course, i made this myself
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